初中英语优秀作文评析二

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日为妇女节。→It was Women’s Day.
　　（2）王雷去商店购物。→Wang Lei went shopping and bought much food.
　　（3）王雷打扫卫生。→He cleaned the room.
　　（4）他烧饭。母亲回家很高兴。→He did the cooking. When his mother came back, she was very happy.

　　完成组句后，“连句成段”，可加上句子间的衔接句子。如在（1）与（2）之间可加上Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother.

　　在最后可再谈王雷一天的感受：He was very tired, but he felt happy.把这些句子连成段后，最后“通篇润色”。

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