英语老师经常教导学生,写作一定要结合生活,人、物、事三结合才能写出优秀的作文,比如“五一劳动节”,国际节日。马上要过五一了,不光是国内中小学孩子假期归来要写作劳动节作文,也许国外的孩子也要写的。因为是国际节日（偷笑）,那劳动节作文要如何写呢,怎么写才能评为优秀作文?要注意这几点：第一、开头要明确,些事就是些事,写人就要些人,不管混淆。
  
第二、注意时态和时间逻辑性,这是英语作文的重点之一。
第三,要想写出优秀的英语节日作文,要注意单词和句子的错误不要出现。下面来看看管庄校区刘同学2011年“五一劳动节”的作文片段 May first is a Sunday。
  And it is the Labor’s Day。My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window。What a fine day!Let’s go to park,” So my mother,my classmate and I went to the park。
  We took some foods in my schoolbag。On the way to the park。I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds。I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on。
  Below the trees,there are several kinds of flowers。It’s colorful,blue,red,yellow,pink,purple,orange and white。I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky。
  I ate popcorn,cornflakes,banana and lollipop。they were wonderful。In the afternoon,we went to the zoo。I visited the birds,mice,cats,dogs,budgies,hamsters,rabbits and so on。
  May Day is my favorite day!五一就要到了,同学们开始对五一劳动节英语作文重视起来,文新学堂望京校区张老师就说：写作文,尤其是写英语作文,必须要兴中有“数”。